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Post by + R y o k u on May 19, 2008 18:47:35 GMT -5
This is the registration thread for the Shisou Clan. Please use the following template for your registration.
Name The name of your character. Age The character's age. Caste Which caste your character belongs to.Position What position within the caste your character fills. Appearance What your character looks like. Please note that all Shisou have silver hair and golden eyes unless First Generation [Inducted into the Shisou, not born into it] Seal Your desired seal. Be creative, but don't go over the top. Seal effects are based on the genetics of the shinobi themselves, so your seal will reflect you in some way.
[b]Name[/b] [b]Age[/b] [b]Caste[/b] [blockquote][i]Position[/i][/blockquote] [b]Appearance[/b] [b]Seal[/b]
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Post by + R y o k u on Jun 8, 2008 5:34:14 GMT -5
Storing chakra in a seal for that seems kind of overdoing it. A simple constant-flow requirement to create a 'bubble of chakra around the user and a space slightly taller than her and slightly wider than a person laying down' would suffice.
Reword the seal and I'll check it again.
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Toku
Jōnin
Kishō Kamae
Posts: 52
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Post by Toku on Jun 8, 2008 12:06:16 GMT -5
Modified =_O
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Post by + R y o k u on Jun 8, 2008 13:49:18 GMT -5
Take out the 'expelling chakra' part. You can make a defensive dome, but it wouldn't fling itself out of you, it would manifest into existence around you. Not only would 'flinging' it make it too much like the Hyuga's Kaiten for comfort, but it would have adverse effects when you're trying to heal someone -- For example, you'd shove them away and likely injure them.
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Toku
Jōnin
Kishō Kamae
Posts: 52
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Post by Toku on Jun 8, 2008 13:54:53 GMT -5
Modified =_O
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Post by + R y o k u on Jun 8, 2008 14:14:02 GMT -5
Approve'd.
Welcome to the clan.
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